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24 January 2011 @ 09:40 am
Wilting Over  

Title: Wilting Over
Pairing: Heechul/?, implied!broken!HanChul
Rating: R for implied sex
Notes: I don't really know what happened? Comments are very much appreciated♥


Heechul shivered as hands ran up and down his side, rhythmically, sensually, somehow comforting. He let himself kiss back when soft lips found in his in a not all together unkind kiss.

This wasn't exactly how it was supposed to be; it was the wrong person doing all of the right things that hadn't always been right. The hand on the inside of his thigh wasn't supposed to be as pale as he was, the body above his wasn't supposed to molded out of mostly hard muscle. They shouldn't be whispering in his ear in such natural Korean.

For a moment Heechul thought about fighting the high, thought about refusing to fall like he wanted to, needed to so badly. The Wrong Person touched him suddenly just the Right Person used to and Heechul swore he heard a strangled whisper in an unfortunately foreign language and he was falling hard and fast with a dry sob.

He forced himself to respond to the languid kiss, hating himself a little more than when this all started. The Wrong Person cleaned him gently, treating Heechul's body almost reverently. He tried not to have a fit or get sick as his hair was stroked softly and pushed off his sweaty brow.

The other man finally settled down behind Heechul who could feel more than hear the yawn as the Wrong Person pressed up against his back. "I love you, you know, Heechul," was whispered against the back of his neck before the other fell asleep.

Heechul clamped a hand over his mouth and fought the urge to throw up, struggling to keep his body still as he sobbed quietly. It was always the right things, but never the right person.

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mikaela monsoon  ❤: kurt {devastated}pink_pot on January 24th, 2011 10:32 pm (UTC)
OH GOD. OH MY GOD ;_____________________;
MoChanDesumochandesu on January 24th, 2011 10:45 pm (UTC)
I DIDN'T BREAK YOU, DID I (;▽;)
macoothamacootha on January 24th, 2011 11:18 pm (UTC)
this is sooo.....I dont know...cant think and cant breath properly right now!

I soo want a sequel but i now its already perfect the way it is....damn you
macoothamacootha on January 24th, 2011 11:21 pm (UTC)
ahh, and the link in miracle to your fic is defect ^^
MoChanDesumochandesu on January 24th, 2011 11:22 pm (UTC)
Oh! Thank you for telling me :)
MoChanDesumochandesu on January 24th, 2011 11:21 pm (UTC)
I have no clue what I'd write for a sequel or offer one X3
Maybe I'll write some mushy happy HanChul in a bit to make up for this :D
macoothamacootha on January 24th, 2011 11:37 pm (UTC)
no prob ^^...happy Hanchul is always good
tokkei_12: traintokkei_12 on January 25th, 2011 05:54 am (UTC)
Guuuuuh D: I really feel like crying now T.T That was so angsty, but so beautifully depressing. I'm glad that the dude is called the Wrong Person rather than having a name because it really hits home that this is not Hankyung and that no one can replace him. And the image of Heenim crying at the end... *sobs* T.T

But I still loved it! &hearts
MoChanDesumochandesu on January 25th, 2011 11:35 pm (UTC)
Don't cry! /cuddles
But thank you very much!♥
just_kyuriouskyureeus on January 26th, 2011 07:53 pm (UTC)
WAI ARE YOUUUU LIKE THIS?! ;_________;
*sobs*
MoChanDesumochandesu on January 26th, 2011 08:49 pm (UTC)
I ASKED YOU FIRST (;▽;)



But don't cry D: